Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Hi Rylen, this post is very good. The detail in the relay slide is very cool. It was very interesting. Next time maybe don't put the same picture on a lot of the backgrounds.
Hi Rylen,I really like this this because i can see how much effort you have put in to this. And the amount of detail you also put in it. Question,would you like to go to the olympics.
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omg i beat this took long a lot of work on this
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ReplyDeletethis post is very good. The detail in the relay slide is very cool. It was very interesting. Next time maybe don't put the same picture on a lot of the backgrounds.
Hi, Rylen I really like this post because I can see the amount of work you have done, Decan. you have put alot of sides in there
ReplyDeleteHi Rylen,I really like this this because i can see how much effort you have put in to this. And the amount of detail you also put in it. Question,would you like to go to the olympics.
ReplyDeletenice job Rylen i really like it great job.
ReplyDeletenice job Rylen you have pot so much enfit in to that great 😁😄😃😀🙃
ReplyDeletei like your work its really cool
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