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Thursday, August 13, 2020

the match

 Mr gold scraped the match extremely hard against the match box, then the flame lit it was burning the wood vigorously.




I heard a sparking sound like me eating rice bubbles in the morning  and then i heard flames.







My nose picked up the scent of smoke then I smelt burnt popcorn.





When I opened my mouth I could taste a sweet flame or sensation  of burnt toast.





I picture that I touched the flame and I thought it would burn my hand off.
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2 comments:

  1. Jacoby GoldingSeptember 11, 2020 at 11:00 AM

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  2. ArmanNovember 27, 2020 at 11:49 AM

    Wow! Rylen you did the job done! There are soo many good words i would rate this out of 9/10! Great job!

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